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Kimiko
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Post by Kimiko on Aug 15, 2020 7:46:48 GMT
Kimiko wasn’t sure what was going on once Zef said that he had an idea, but after he spoke he started to walk around her. She wasn’t sure if he was examining her like she had done to him when they had first come across one another or if he was doing something else. When he started to grow crystal across his entire body Kimiko began to suspect what he was going to do, but didn’t get any real confirmation until she felt his crystal covered finger slide across the edge of her blade.
The sound wasn’t one that Kimiko had heard prior as there had been nothing like crystal on the Void Diver that she had cut in the past. It was similar to the sound of metal cutting against metal yet the pitch was off. Either way that wasn’t something essential to ponder about at the moment. When Zef brought up the proposition of a fight between them, she flashed him a wide grin. This expression wasn’t the same innocent cheerful ones that she had displayed up to this point, but one filled with challenge and invigaration. It was plain to see, she was excited for a fight.
“Who said I need a friend to protect me? Maybe I’m the one that’ll be protecting you? Let’s find out if little Kimiko needs protection by the big crystal dragon.” Kimiko teased Zef as she pointed to the fish which based on its appearance was done. “Bring that with you or finish it first though, can’t waste it. That wouldn’t be a good thing to do.” Kimiko smiled as she waited for Zef to choose what he was going to do regarding his meal and then would start to hover off the first floor. Once ready she’d start to fly off from the forest towards some sort of secluded area with as little life as possible.
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Zeferoth
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Post by Zeferoth on Aug 15, 2020 8:11:24 GMT
Zeferoth's smile only grew when her smile matched his own. That was the fire that he had sensed in her, and hoped that he was right about. Zeferoth's tail swayed, and thudded against the ground in excitement. Unlike the fiasco in the north, this was one fight that he was looking forward to. It was almost comical to see the giant lizard man staring down the little android, and her staring right up at him like there wasn't even a problem. His battle lust was already kicking in, and he wanted to fight here and now.
He had to chuckle at the thought that Kimiko would be the one protecting him. He would follow to her finger to the large fish that was now done. Zeferoth had almost completely forgotten his meal. Zeferoth straightened seemingly returning back to normal in an instant. He slammed his massive fist into his chest and relaxed allowing the crystal armor to fall off his body, and onto the ground. "Lets get that eaten now. Might as well not fight on an empty stomach after all." He said walking back over to the fire. He sat down, and tore into the fish. He would put even the most hardiest of speed eaters to shame by the sheer speed he stripped the flesh from the bones. Once the fish was eaten, Zeferoth would motion for Kimiko to lead the way and follow her to their training ground.
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"Rumia, please. I'm trying to train."
Atsuko
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Post by Atsuko on Aug 20, 2020 0:30:11 GMT
Sorry about the wait, you two! I'll be grading your thread now. So without further ado... Zeferoth has earned 18 PL and 1,800 Zenny! This brings your totals to 119 PL and 6,050 Zenny! Kimiko has earned 18 PL and 1,600 Zenny! This brings your totals to 83 PL and 3,250 Zenny! Critiques: The writing here was mostly sound, and there's no notes to really make about it. Although I noticed that Kimiko used "idk" in one of her posts. I don't know if that was meant to be her saying "I-D-K" aloud, or just shorthand for "I don't know" on the writer's part. In the future, I would ask that this is specified if it's meant to be a thing said in-character. Because we would prefer that it's fully written out otherwise, as it looks nicer. If you have any further questions about critiques and explanations I could offer, feel free to DM me on the Discord! All that aside, your gains will be applied shortly!
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