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Asmoskon
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Straight
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Human
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184PL
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8,550z
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Punk Street Scum
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Played by Asmoskon
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Post by Asmoskon on Aug 30, 2020 5:21:01 GMT
Technique Name: Control Ring Technique Type: Attack/Defense Attack Type: Physical - Beam Level: 1 (0/20) Mastery Bonus: [Ki Efficiency]: -5 Ki Cost Description: By channeling his ki into his hand a ring spawns around the appendage. Once active Asmoskon is able to block incoming attacks with the hand that has this ring. Ki attacks though are special as the ring can be extended down from his hand around the ki colliding against his hand. This opposing ki wll be compressed down into a sphere with the white ring rotating around it demonstrating its control. Asmoskon is then able to fire off this sphere carrying the power of his ring and the ki that has been successfully controlled.
Technique Name: Perseverance Technique Type: Utility Level: 1 (0/10) Mastery Bonus: [Improved Healing]: +10% Healing Description: A subconscious technique that Asmoskon in truth has no control over, this ability stems from his instinct to survive and win. When pushed into a corner close to defeat this ability triggers which rapidly heals Asmoskon. This takes a full 3 actions in a post leaving Asmoskon essentially paralyzed while his body repairs itself. Can only be activated while Asmoskon is under 25% health.
Technique Name: Adamantine Impact Technique Type: Attack Attack Type:, Physical Level: 1 (0/20) Mastery Bonus: [Cool Off]: Reduces Enemy's Dodges by 10% Description: A charging technique that employs the principle of Adamantine Body at the last moment prior to impact. Flexing the muscles of one's entire body causing the impact to become far more powerful as the density of the user skyrockets.
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"Rumia, please. I'm trying to train."
Atsuko
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Female
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Lesbian
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Saiyan
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579 PL
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5,034z
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109 Dragon Coins
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Albino Saiyan
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Played by Amord
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Post by Atsuko on Aug 31, 2020 15:05:37 GMT
Okay, here we go! So there's a few things I need clarified here.
1 - Control Ring From what I can tell, this is supposed to be a block, but it also doubles as a parry? Since Kosho has a Technique like this, I think that's fine, especially with the limitation in mind. Just note that if it's stronger than your block, you'll only be able to partially block the attack, and I don't know if you'll be able to control any of the power either.
2 - Perseverance This one leaves me a little confused. I get that it's a Healing Technique, and you're flavoring it as being something he can't control, and only something he can activate when under a certain threshold of HP... However, it takes 3 actions to use. Does that mean it operates off of a different charge? How much does it heal? Could it be charged normally? I need to know more about how it works.
3 - Presence of the Predator This one I'm just not sure about. Near as I can tell, this is less of a Technique and more of a description of his character, dictating how he should feel to others. It doesn't seem to offer any mechanical benefit over than a stun? I'm unsure of allowing it even under those circumstances just because it would be difficult to tell what fair thresholds would be. And an automatic KO is a bit much.
With how Presence of the Predator is written right now, I'm thinking it will have to be denied, unless I'm misunderstanding something here?
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