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Post by Zeferoth on Aug 15, 2020 16:45:03 GMT
Offensive Techniques:
Technique Name: Crystal Javelin Technique Type: Attack Attack Type: Cutting, Elemental Level: 1 (0/20) [Please leave this as-is. Staff will handle this for you.] Mastery Bonus: [Cool Off]: Reduces Enemy's Dodges by 10% Description: With focus, Zeferoth is able to form long shards of crystal six feet long. He is able to use these large shards as close/mid range weapon like a spear, or throw it at his enemy like a javelin.
Technique Name: Crystal Cannon Technique Type: Attack Attack Type: Beam/Elemental Level: 1 (0/20) [Please leave this as-is. Staff will handle this for you.] Mastery Bonus: [Charging Efficiency]: +10% Extra Charge Description: Zeferoth's crystals form into a cylindrical barrel around his left arm extending a foot out from his hand. Zeferoth channels his ki into this cannon.
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Post by Atsuko on Aug 15, 2020 20:09:15 GMT
Alright.
Now, Crystal Cannon. This is gonna be one that I have to deny. I appreciate the efforts to balance it, but out of the box it's simply too powerful, being equivalent to a Racial.
Which also brings me to the math that I did, where a lot of damage stacking can be done to fire off an attack for minimal Ki Cost, but you're doing WAY more damage compared to anyone else, who have to spend their actions charging normally to match it.
I'm not accusing you of intentionally trying to game the system of course, I'm simply observing that this type of Technique makes it possible, and I'm going to err on the side of caution and deny it; because approving it would open the door for other people to try and use similarly built Techniques for ill intent.
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Post by Zeferoth on Aug 15, 2020 23:59:42 GMT
Edited Crystal Cannon to be more of a "Special Beam Cannon" type of attack trying to find a balance between power, and uniqueness.
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Post by Atsuko on Aug 18, 2020 1:46:16 GMT
So in an attempt to better understand the effects going on here. Does this mean that, regardless of Tier used, it adds 10% of his PL in damage before any other charging or effects occur? Because in such a case, I'll still have to consider this an odd choice. To better demonstrate what I mean: Actions: 1 - Charging Crystal Cannon, charge goes from 10% to 15% 2 - Charging Crystal Cannon, charge goes from 15% to 20% 3 - Fires Crystal Cannon at 20% Charge Alternatively: All 3 Actions - Charge goes from 10% to 30%
From what I can tell. This would be more like... 1 - Charging Crystal Cannon, charge goes from 10% to 20% 2 - Can choose to charge it more, or fire it then (?) Either way. I would ask that Techniques follow the charging rules already laid out, as it's less confusing for everyone involved.
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Post by Zeferoth on Aug 19, 2020 0:35:33 GMT
edited once again
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Post by Atsuko on Aug 20, 2020 4:30:58 GMT
Alright! Approved! These will be added to your list shortly!
Just note that you will be unable to use these in any existing threads. You can use/learn them in any new threads from this point on, however.
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